Friday, November 10, 2017

Fall Series Draft #3

This week I continued to study John French's photos and continue to capture images of models with different props and different styles of clothing. My main goal this week was to have my models us their arms to create angles against the edge of the frame to create negative space.
















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12 comments:

  1. AnonymousNovember 10, 2017 at 2:25 PM

    These are great; I have no suggestions. Keep up the good work!

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  2. UnknownNovember 10, 2017 at 2:29 PM

    These are pretty cool. No further comments. Nice job

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  3. MaxNovember 10, 2017 at 2:33 PM

    You successfully completed your goals, as your models created negative space with their arms. Good job!

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  4. sophie cohenNovember 10, 2017 at 2:33 PM

    I thought these were great! I don't have any suggestions for you, good job.

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  5. AnonymousNovember 10, 2017 at 2:35 PM

    I like your use of accessories in the photos and how you used different models, I have no suggestions.

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  6. AnonymousNovember 10, 2017 at 2:35 PM

    Not much to say but a job well done.

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  7. KikiNovember 10, 2017 at 7:01 PM

    I really like how you're experimenting with different models and I think using the arms as frames was a good call. I don't have any suggestions. Great job.

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  8. AnonymousNovember 10, 2017 at 9:51 PM

    I really like the addition or more props, and I think that works very well. My only suggestion is maybe adding more dark tones or something else on top of the black and white filter to make your model pop more.

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  9. UnknownNovember 12, 2017 at 12:49 PM

    These are great! I love the variety of props used and the how you were able to use more models. Nice job

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  10. AnonymousNovember 12, 2017 at 5:07 PM

    This series is your best yet! I love the way you have the fashion framing the people and the people's arms framing the photo. Keep it up!

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  11. AnonymousNovember 13, 2017 at 8:19 AM

    Fantastic job with this week's series. Your use of arms as negative space works very well! The props work well with the photo because it adds a creative style to the clothing. I think the photos that have a darker background tends to create a deeper mood in the picture that John French demonstrates throughout his photography. Great work this week!

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  12. AnonymousNovember 13, 2017 at 9:31 AM

    I like how this draft seems more clear than your previous draft and also the lighting really captures the models well

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