This week I worked on adding more depth to my photos as well as having color be present in my images. I struggled with making the lines thin as well as having the photo in focus. I also struggled with finding a space that was dark enough to photograph. This week I only had 13 images due to not finding enough spaces to photograph. I have enjoyed this project because I keep needing to come up with new ideas to light paint. I also enjoyed getting to play with color within the images.
I love these photos, I thought you did a really good job. I love the different colors you used. I also like how wide each photo is. Good job!
ReplyDeleteYou have become so incredible at this. It's really exciting tracking your progress over the past several weeks. I have no suggestions; you have a lot of amazing options to choose from in making your book.
ReplyDeleteGood Job Lauren. I really like your layering technique in these light painting images. Late into my light painting drafts I began to use a different color light and mix different color lights, which was a great new way to approach this project. Also, using two lights at a time is interesting. Keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteI don't know if this was intentional, but I really like that you got cohesion in most of your photos because you had a main defining line to pop out of your images. This line was kind of like your signature and it would be interesting if you added an actual signature you used in most of your photos. Keep doing what you're doing!
ReplyDeleteThese are so good. I think you did a great job at adding more depth to your photos. I also really like the colors you used. Nice job!
ReplyDeleteThis looks really cool! Good work
ReplyDeleteThese are amazing! I love the different colors you chose, it really helps the image stand out! I really like how these seem a little free style of each image. I like the second to last one the best. Nice!
ReplyDeleteI really like the abstractness of these photos and the different colors you used, my suggestion is to edit out background objects that you can see
ReplyDeleteI really like how the colors floor. These images feel really cohesive. Great work
ReplyDeleteThese are really nice photos and I like how you added color to your series. I would suggest to now take it a step further and try to create shapes or letters by light painting. Keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteI like how the lines are formed in more of an abstract way, rather than just creating a standard shape/idea.
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